Sweating, shining
Intertwining bodies
Passionate kissing
.
...Touching
.
......Tasting
Exploring every inch
Every luscious curve
Nipples are erect
.......~*~
..Desires burning
Molten juices flowing
Water jets pulsating
...~ In and out ~
A mind-blowing thrusting
.
.....Oh, yes!
.
Eroticism at it's best
Sensations building
A bursting releasing
.....Ahhh
..So pleasing
.......~*~
A Jacuzzi sunset
Author notes
I know that it's mild erotica compared to some of my other writes. I have not tried writing erotica in a long while.
Hope you like it Allie
Prompt
37) You knew it was coming!!! EROTICA! You better make it pornographic though! It is difficult to get me interested unless it's very intense, explicit, and full of imagery! Make sure you label it "adult" and "erotica".
A contest entry
- FIVE YEAR AP ANNIVERSARY BASH!!!! by Auburn Sunrise.
5000 points, ended August 15, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh My Word~
I wondered what pieces I was missing to read
Wowzers~
The heat radiating from the screen my Friend straightened every curl
Excellent and what a Gem You brought to the bash~
Bravo!! Wooooooooooot!!
Yep- the images come alive!!
for postcards
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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You know, I love the rhyme in this. You never cease to amaze me. It was a bit mild, but so happy and exciting that it swept me away in the moment just as much if not better than all those graphic writes.
Also, you rock free-verse. The words were perfect, the rhythm was perfect... the picture... the imagery... yeah you definitely did an awesome job!
Excellent entry!!! -
I love this! Love the picture!
..Desires burning
Molten juices flowing
Water jets pulsating
...~ In and out ~
A mind-blowing thrusting
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So wonderfully and beautifully passionate
Sensuality at its' best Reminds me of my Northern Star
Wishing you light and love always and the best in this contest! -
My Darling Husband,
Well now!
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
I love you, always
~Manda
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