Silently swept
aside by
autumn's whisper,
butterflies
dance in
crimson hue
below the
majestic maple.
Please tell me what you think
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and what happens that is worthy of a poem?
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Maple
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: autumn's whisper also majestic maple- for some reason I was shown a green caterpillar going up a tree-also magnifying glass over what appears to be a trail of ants- as if either trying to blaze their trail so to speak or just getting a closer look and being shown marshmallows for some reason Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Magnificent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Lovely imagery! You paint a complete picture in just 15 words. Excellent.
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what an awesomeness take on the prompt...... great job and thank you for sharing this lovely piece and good luck in contest......!
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You paint such a beautiful picture..so colorful ...lifting heart...Enjoyed reading thsi much!
all the best in the contest!
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awww this is so calm and beautiful, nicely done and good luck with the contest,take care
Stephanie ♥
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