A hopeless romantic, but will never tell anyone.
A starving artist, who can never find her place in the world.
The one person you can alway know that will have you back.
Some one that will hide behind a smile, just so you wont feel bad.
With all my faults, and the insperation that keeps me makeing myself better, makes me write more and more every day.
My insperation is living the life I want to live day by day.
A contest entry
- Who Are You? by Acidanthra.
1000 points, ended August 11, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Not for sure if this was excatly what the contest was about. First one I have written in a long time. Kind of had a bad cause of writters block
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you spelled making and inspiration wrong... but i is still a very good poem. just fix the spelling mistakes. and it will be great^^
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Oh. This is a nice little poem that you have going on in here. It has a lot of positive thoughts and feelings and you show how much you care about others. That's such a great thing. The only thing you might want to do on this, is run it through spell check. 'Some one' is one word and 'insperation' is spelled 'inspiration'. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.
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makeing should be making, but other than that it is great!!! i love it!!! the first two lines are my favorite!!! lolz. good job! i love this!
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I really felt I could relate to this poem...
"Some one that will hide behind a smile, just so you wont feel bad" - thats me all over!!
I really enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue to write through your block.. I experienced the same thing for a year and have only just managed to write again. Its hard but believe in yourself.
Loved the poem, keep it up!!
DB x
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you sound like a delightful soul...
and I hear ya too...writing is for me an instrument that
we are blessed to practice upon!
For me it helped to read as much poetry as I possibly
could from many of the writers here on all poetry.
Inspired by their words of choice and metaphor.
I hear a lot of beautiful metaphors and simile's just
waiting to be released into lovely poetic harmony!
and p.s. remember, there is a spell-check button
when you add a poem.
we don't want to lose the beauty of your imagery
because of too many mis-spellings.
ears/Seattle
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