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Breakfast At the Diner

Three girls came in with a father
or father-figure and took a table

One got up for the restroom

When walking back I thought she
looked quite a bit like you

With her hair tied up – but the
color was a different shade

And her skin though like yours
was a lighter tone

And she was wearing a tiny stud
in a corner of her mouth, where
you were never one for jewelry

And so she really wasn’t all that
much like you

But I went home
and cried a river just the same

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  • Patpowers
    August 9, 2009
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    Interesting people that you meet at the diner...liked the ending at this about crying a river.. Nice job!