Laying on my bed
Everything's a blur
The tears wont stop
My cheeks wet
I lost you forever
And it still hurts
It's been over a year
But it feels longer
The words hurt so much
The memories too
How come they come
So hard and strong
You said forever
And never will that change
But 2 months later
And it all fell apart
Big Ducky you still
And it'll never change
Own my heart
As broken as it is
Author notes
um....kinda hard to explain whats behind this....
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Wow! Very well done! You used some great imagery here, without getting too wordy. Nice job!
~Robby~
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aw don't worry about having to explain in your author notes I think we can all relate to this in our own ways and its very good by the way
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I lost you forever
And it still hurts
Um, that's harsh.
To know something that final gotta hurt....
Loving that last stanza.
Well written. I hope you feel better.....
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Very well written Hunny.
We both know I can relate to this... -
this is beautifully written. i have a friend here who is going through the same thing as described in your poem and it is so upsetting to see when a good thing suddenly goes wrong. hope your ok. xx
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Babe!
This has me in tears!
Great work!
Such real emotion.
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sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
your so gorguz babe
this is so good
rely expressive
miss you love you heaps keep up the good work and i know that this isnt just a poem its a hole world of emotions behind this love you my bob
xoxoxoxo
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this is a beautiful poem... so much pain...
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