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Rhapsody

Angry and burdened
Shut out
Close the curtain
Kill doubt
Know for certain
The whole situation's worsened

This is what I feel
So just respect that
Instead of arguing the deal
Know that this is fact
I'm here and I'm for real
It's reality you lack
Not quite sane
Not quite plain
But'cha great up in the sack

Blow my phone up
Day and night
Put that bitch on silent
To avoid a fight
Before those lights and sirens
Go and ruin my night
Man, this can't be right
Man, this can't be life

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  • Living-Nightmare
    December 9, 2008
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    Thats really good.
    It flows together really well.


  • Pallas Athena
    September 25, 2008

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    interesting

    I have had moments that feel like what you described here.. Makes a person wonder what is worth anything anymore??


  • Dame Culottee
    September 3, 2008
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    I dig Very good writing.


  • Whitefaeryofdeath
    August 8, 2008
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    I would tell you not to date crazy chicks, but what other kind is there? Nice work for the poem.


  • AnotherFace
    August 8, 2008

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    Oh goodness. *note to self, never anger Mr. Steve-o*

    Eitherrrr way, I'm glad I got to read an update from you =]

    I miss talking to you


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    August 7, 2008

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    Hmmm. This is thought provoking. Seems like there's someone whose only worth one thing, but even that's not worth the fight that she'll put up if you shun her.

    Hope all is ok

    xox

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