Standing tall and majestic...
Trees can teach us a thing or too.
They sway and bend.
Their arms are branches not fingers
And they boast leaves for foilage not skin.
They show age within thir bark
Where we show wrinlkes with age,
Overall,
One thing they do we can't...
Is that they provide us shade.
As for energy .
Trees use the sun and rain
Where we use vitamins and food.
but
Trees can be elegant in beauty
And they don't need make-up as women do!
dragonheart1
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A contest entry
- Paint your picture in my mind_contest part one of four by drakostheron.
950 points, ended October 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love nature and trees..flowers and birds
Reminded me of an Arabic proverb that says: Live free or die standing like trees.
You better delete the last line before women see it and don't expect to win the contest if the judge is a woman lol.Only jk It was very nice.I liked it a lot.
Good luck in the contest!!!
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