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I....
don't know you
but i feel you watching me as I
sleep..
Slumbering deeply I feel you...
watching me
as I breathe and dream of
you

Though I know you not
you follow me in the day
and protect me from harm
and take blows that would have otherwise,
killed me but you say

"I would die for you
bleed for you
step in your place so you will
live in peace",
but I know you...
not

Yet, I do
for I feel you coming for me
the one promised to me
before i was born and
only a figment of god's imagination
for me,
he promised you

So... I know you from dreams
and airs of protection
and a love that surrounds
and breaks and mends and
withstands and binds all

Though I know not the face I will..
I will wait for you
to come to me
and sweep me off my feet
and over that threshold
for you he promised to me
and I he promised you...

My door is open
come in,
Now.

Author notes

It is hard to explain, but there is this feeling that surrounds me now that HE is near. Not just anyone, but HIM. Dare I dream, and more over, believe?

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  • Chief Callahan
    August 6, 2008
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    This was very deep...very imaginative....and most importantly, this sounds very personal which makes this that much more of a connectaable poem. A feeling that i believe we have all felt from time to time and is a hard thing to describe, but i think that you did you an outstanding job.