Graduated
Agitated
Wasted my days
. now pay
. you owe me
. now pay
Money's toppled
Cops and rubble
waste away my daze.
. I see the light of day!
Danger Danger
high topped stranger
mind my gangster mind?
Distracted by tweedle dee
and tweedle doo
dee dum am I.
A contest entry
- Where Are Your Marbles? by AliceinPoetryLand.
1800 points, ended August 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i had a comment waiting for you cos i looked at your comments made and knew you were being evil lol
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a good poem penned, though i found it rather choppy in parts, in fact not parts, the whole of it was choppy.
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With the high-pace existing within today's world, it seems that no one has any time for themselves anymore - There's a bunch of robots doing the same thing everyday and not even living life anymore. Your poem has made me think about that - Nice entry for the contest, and thanks so much for commenting on my poem.
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Well this is certainly different and very thought provoking. Thank you so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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