I have heard many rumors about theDARK1
Some of it mysterious and the other shrouded in secrecy
Before the day arrives for him to tie the knot
I made it a point to speak now or forever hold my piece
I planned this wild and memorable bachelor party
TheDark1 had no idea who I was
This would be the night he would never forget
For I asked the ShadowedOne to help a good cause
She has this aura around her that is sensual
I know how her words can get men hot
I planned to light the room on fire
Her energy would be nonstop
The guest of honor had his own special seat
The other men surrounded the king on the throne
Music started to play that was jumping
Getting the bodies all heated and warm
The stage was set for the entertainment
Her name was announced to the crowd
From beyond the curtain she emerged
All the men’s heads took a bow
Her mesmerizing beauty silenced conversations
She came out on stage in a robe
Started dancing erotically with each beat
The pants of theDARK1 hid a large bulge
The Shadow moved closer to the man of the hour
Licking her lips with hungry eyes
On her back she lay and opened
Showing theDARK1 her soft creamy thighs
Her hands caressed over the black robe
She slowly untied the strings
Stood up and tossed it behind her
Leaving only her bra, panties and angel wings
The wings on her back fluttered with each movement
She glanced over to theDARK1 and blew a kiss
Did the splits on the stage and then turned over
Sliding closer to the edge to give a better glimpse
She grabbed theDARK1’s head with her hands
Wrapped her long legs around him gently
Pulled his mouth to her crotch
Rocking back and forth seductively
She slid off stage onto his lap
Put her tongue into his inviting mouth
Took his hands and removed her bra
Then moved his fingers down south
She rode his bulge till he hollered
Put her breasts in his face and squeezed
Allowing him to lick each nipple
Then put them in her own mouth lovingly
The other men yelled and screamed for more
The Shadow gave the guest of honor one hell of a show
Before leaving she wanted to leave him a token
So on the table she did go
She showed him what he wished he could have
Beckoned him closer to taste
Teased him with her fingers inside her mouth
Poured his favorite beverage between her legs
His long tongue lapped it all up without hesitation
Sucked till he drank her dry again and again
The Shadow smiled and gave him a thank you kiss
And her number she gave to him on a napkin
Author notes
I hope the Shadow and theDARK1 enjoy for this is a party for theDARK1 and I have a tremendous amount of respect for her~
Written January 12th, 2004
A contest entry
- DARKs bachelor party by theDARK1.
305 points, ended January 18, 2004, 5 entries
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Comments
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wow This is a hot written poem, and exceptionally well done. I think dark1 is pleased with what u came up with. I hope u win this contest, I think u deserve to
Luves ME
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hmm, sounds like a pretty hot strip show, well written and good flow, but, if I was having a party I'd like some Alcoholic Beverages a gastronomic feast and a lot of loud hard tunes to keep the atmo a-groovin, wish I was DARK for this little number tho...fs
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i can only hope that the shadow can get as excited about me as this work was about us. this was extremely well written and not to mention hot 'n' juicy and did i say ~~hot~~? you penned a superb bachelor party....just think, i am still going to be a bachelor after the party. i just couldn't see stopping these parties even though the wedding has been called off. i want to thank you for your entry. definitely enjoyed the hell out of it...still licking my lips! yummy!
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