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Baby

you called me baby
since the day we met
you always played around with me
and you never left
now is the time
to call me baby
one last time
cause i have to go
my parents are calling
come on just one more time
just one more time to
here your sweet voice
say that special nickname
it makes me feel sweet
and special inside
you calling me baby
all the time

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  • Shacadia Shay
    October 28, 2008

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    cute poem the last bit kinda didn't make sense. great write though.
    --Blessed be--
    Shacadia Shay


  • daddy joker
    August 8, 2008
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    Great write.