Lazy arm across the pillow
Whispering in your ear
Voice so soft
that angels strain to hear from aloft
But it doesn't matter what I say
I woke up next to you
Sometime after noon
Willows wandering
in the breeze
just outside the window
My love snuggling in my arms
My voice softly singing Irish lullabyes
and charms
A pleasant tune echoing across the moor
Author notes
Hrm...too many words. But I am satisfied with what I wrote. So...
...even if you don't want to give it any kind of medal...I hope you enjoy it.
A contest entry
- Good Morning Sunshine by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended August 9, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY by bookworm987.
400 points, ended February 15, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Respect is asked for, given and understood... :)
Comments
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This was amazingly cimple and breezy and just plain beautiful. It was so gentle and loving and...I don't even really know how to describe it. I felt like I was there. Very easy vibe to it-like the love was just easy. I'm lost for words, which is a good thing, because that means you really impressed me. Good luck in the contest!
[Liz<3] -
Gentle
A wonderful romantic morning. Soft and delicate. I love the visual and the lullabye. I did enjoy it. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest.
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