Dedicated to those who love the light!
Like rays of bright white heavenly light,
Sun beams seep through the tall trees so bright...
Making the tree's illuminate in heavenly-like radiance,
Their changing light forms mesmeric inducing trance..
The ground a strange opalescent green so deep,
Throught the tops of the tall trees the sky does peep!
The hypnotic quality of centre point of the beams,
Forming a kind of heavenly messenger figure it seems...
Ablaze with silvery yet chocolate tinged white,
The Trees awash with striped sepia hues a wonderous sight...
Who switched on the stunning heavenly light?
You guess it was mother nature, right?!
Copyright:K:2008
Author notes
Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
Contest Picture inspiration by crazymomma
Just write about the pic. It can be literal or metaphorically or just how it makes you feel.
Rules:
nothing over 50 lines unless it's extravagantly wonderful
be kind enough to comment on at least 3 other entries
Enter this contest
* This is an anonymous contest - your name will be hidden from editors
* Closes in 6 days
* Rewards - Gold: 300
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem
Picture depicts:
Beautiful light beams shining through tall trees in a forrest setting, green grass blue sky and very mesmeric.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture inspiration by crazymomma.
400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 40 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a lovely take on the picture prompt. You have used some amazingly beautiful imagery in this poem. Great job, and best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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Very nice.
Another very well written piece from you.
YOu have such an amazing talent for this.
I love to read your poems. Always amazes me.
Good luck in contest .
-Mandi
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Thanks Millions!
Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
Glad you liked it. Your work is excellent too! You are also very talented.
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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this is lovely!
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Thanks millions!
Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
Glad you liked it.
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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