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You Have No Idea

There is a feeling I have
That I can hardly explain.
Not to anyone except him.
He's the only one who could understand my pain.

There is an emptiness inside of me.
Something has gone missing
And I can't find it again.
I can't keep dismissing.

This guy means the world.
I've known him for years
And right now...
He's the only one who can stop my tears.

Every song I listen to
Every person I see
Keeps reminding me
That I can't disagree.

He's always in my thoughts and dreams.
Other guys I like,
Well, it's only when I see them
So they all can take a hike.

He found my heart and kept it.
He can keep it for forever
Because if it is in his hands
I don't want it back.

No one knows just how I feel.
There are not words enough
To explain anything.
So right now I have to be tough.

I have to hold on
But it's killing me inside.
It hurts so much to be away
And would feel so good if I could confide.

No one even knows
Just how much I love him.
He's the one for me, I know.
And trust me, I'm not in a whim.

Author notes

Well, it's another for Daniel. No one can ever know what I feel for him. It's crazy how I can be filled with this much love for one guy that I can't even be with! but he's the only one who's in my thoughts and dreams 24/7... I love him to death if you can't already tell... hope you like it.

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  • Lislaine
    October 14, 2008
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    Waw great love you have here for daniel! GoodLuck


  • HereComesTheSun
    August 7, 2008
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    i really like this poem the rhyming was forced at time but great job