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Last Flight

Paper bird
seen not heard
Flying high
in coudy sky
On the brink
soon will sink
Nevermore
swoop or soar

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  • marlene47 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    A fun one on a paper bird - reminds me of paper airplanes that streak across the classroom.
    Thank you for your whimsical entry.
    marlene