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Venus and Mars


Venus meets Mars,
in love that shines so bright.
See how they align themselves,
in the shadows of the moonlight.













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  • KayJay
    August 10, 2008

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    A very creative penning, weaving the background elements into a beautiful rhyme... Excellent take and a most appreciated entry...
    Ken


  • thepoetssoul
    August 6, 2008

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    Tis a most exellent penning indeed.
    The rhyming and rhythm is very good
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    Aww
    I know this image lol
    A beautiful write you have created here
    Woman from Venus her Man from Mars
    Love the way you took this out of the box
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie