Cased leather bound,
Mounted lock to key,
Divides a divider,
lost in ecstasy.
Devoted pill,
swallowed drunken love,
an addiction .
Author notes
http://revmac.deviantart.com/art/WIP-Sensual-Greed-76156892
( Sensual Greed )
20 words only
In a list
A contest entry
- 15/20 Semi - Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
450 points, ended August 11, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done... you've manage to weave all the elements into a sultry penning and keep the darkness flowing. A wonderful write and a terrific entry...
Ken
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Wonderfully done ~ best of luck in the contest
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wow another great write..... wow... just wow..... dont forget your pill lol...... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest!
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This is an exellent piece of poetry
Splendid imagery and word play
Best of wishes to you.
tony
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Whoa.. awesome take hun!! Full of dark desire! Love it!
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Oh very sweet write indeed, Mars would be pleased. My best wishes always.
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