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My Guardian Angels

Gently embracing sleep
Into my soul melodious music seeps
Listening, hearing, symphonies  drifting on air
From whispering wings, tinkling as they fly
My guardian angels passing close by
Melodies from heaven, “Thank You” I sigh



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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    August 6, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    Ahh, a melody indeed. You even managed to rhyme with good flow and rhythm.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy