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rose

being just me,
was enough you see,
to keep you,
for all of 4 weeks
now im agast,
our love did not last,
yet it is you,
my heart still seeks

i cannot forget you,
and i do not regret you,
just wish that,
i had a bit longer,
because if you were still here,
the feelings would reappear,
and in the end,
our love would be stronger,

just need you today,
to understand my way,
and hold you,
and love you the same,
but yet you are gone,
werent coming back all along,
my mistake,
as i lost at your game,

but i'll love you so,
as it will consistenly grow,
i'll wait here,
with or without your grace,
and ill walk away,
loving you today,
just a memory,
of a pretty rose face.

hi

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  • Angelflower
    August 14, 2008

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    Oh this was really beautiful and loving.. you did such a wonderful job in expressing your emotions with this write thanks very much for sharing..


    Angel

  • Manish
    August 11, 2008

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    Simply Beautiful

    Very nice! This is a great poem. I really like it! Very touching! Being with or without... loving today, just a memory, of a pretty rose face - Wow!!!! Simply beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    . Rewarded 4


  • Wolf Mancini
    August 11, 2008
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    A Greeting Card

    This is beautiful...as I said it should be on a greeting card.


    wolf

  • gertee
    August 7, 2008

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    Aww sweetie this is really good, really getting in touch with your emotions whatever is the world coming too?!!