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line and a shadow

a corner is a line
and a shadow.
black and white,
open window to the night
burning candle
is the only light

dripping wax,
i need my fix,
i need to feel you on my skin
burning hot
i got the itch
i got the crave
i need your lips,
i need your touch,
overbearing
but im staring
at the corner
where the ceiling meets the wall
air is only haze
eyes only a screen,

sepia-tone headlights
illuminate the corners of my mind
driving home,
hallucinate
im blind
a line and a shadow
the corner of the room,
where the wall meets the ceiling
but im reeling
im drifting
over the lake,
the moon

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  • Gypsie Ink
    August 9, 2008

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    Hmmmm...

    A most unusual write for a pic of a girl and a bee. I love the flow of this write and I love the whole piece. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest.