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friends

a lawyer, a doctor, many friends on AP
as friends go, they’re all keepers
there’s many more of course, some fair-weather
some funny ones, some weepers

I love and appreciate them all, you see
they make my life so worthwhile
if I should lose them, I’d be oh so sad
for them I’d walk that extra mile

even though they each are so special to me
and for them I’ll go out on a limb
there’s a few who I couldn’t live without
or my world would be gloomy and grim

my mate, my sis, children, all part of me
who bring me joy and happiness
and one other special sister, spirit friend
each brings me more joy than I can express

friendship is one of God’s greatest gifts
I treasure each so dear
I pray these friendships forever last
will linger through each hour, each day, each year

dee garner
© august 6, 2008

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Amen my friend

    Our prayers and wishes linked together as one will help us all see thorough this time of need . And should antone be away for a while always remember this friendship will stay in our hearts and minds forever


  • penman gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Thank you for sharing.


  • twilight fan 4 life
    October 17, 2008

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    hey good poem i agree a 100% on this because if had to lose my friends that i know so long i would cry to and that the friends i have our friendship will last forever


  • Ellis gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    You are NOT my friend! Tiki Cat

    I don't see my picture on this page
    This oversight makes me rage
    I thought you, Dee, were my friend
    Now our friendship is at an end

    You didn't mention me in your rhyme
    Your friendship is not worth a dime
    This poem is just a bore
    I do not like you any more

    Tiki Cat, World's Greatest Poet Cat
    (Boo Hiss)


    • catz Moderators member
      September 16, 2008
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      Aww. sorry, Tiki. I hope you'll reconsider... what if I add your picture to this? Would I be back in your good graces then? You're one in a million, my friend

      Dee


  • angelica silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    Congratulations on your HM. Dee.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    congrats

    Congrats on the Honorable Mention in the contest
    I got that too LOL and
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~


  • Maureen silver member
    August 23, 2008
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    Dear Dee,

    CONGRATULATIONS on receiving Honorable Mention in my contest!



    <3 Maureen


  • Hinemoa silver member
    August 21, 2008
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    Dear Dee, The friendships we form on Allpoetry are sometimes wonderful and can last a lifetime, just as with our friends away from here. I know I'd also be lost without the love and friendship of my hubby Heath, our children and family and most of all my friends. They're all very special.
    I think your poem is absolutely wonderful. Good luck in the voting.
    Love Hine


  • Wesley Storer
    August 14, 2008

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    O.K.!

    Your poems reflect your goodness. I guess I'm one of the weepers. But it's true, I know. I trust your Summer is going well.

    • catz Moderators member
      August 19, 2008
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      You're one of my special friends, Wesley You're a keeper I hope we always keep in touch through our hearts and poetry.

      Summer is going well for me. We're on vacation right now, close to your neck of the woods... The Olympia, Tacome, Seattle area making the rounds to family mostly. They're holding a big BBQ birthday for me Sunday and I think just about all of them will be here... at my youngest daughter's home in Black Diamond. The weather is gorgeous, so much nicer than the heat of Phoenix.
      You take care, my friend

      Dee


  • jenelda silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    Dear Dee, Wonderful poem for all your friends, it's wonderful on AP how one can make friends with folks from all walks in life. Your poem is filled with love.
    Our family are very important in our lives, they are all so special, I know I would be lost without mine.
    Good luck in the judging Dee.
    Love Jen


  • MargaretG
    August 13, 2008

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    exactly

    This is the value of friends, in all their many forms and ways, "they make my life so worthwhile". Your poem is easy to read and I enjoyed every verse.

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 12, 2008

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    excellent~

    This is beautiful sis
    I love you here as a sis on AP and value your friendship highly.....
    Even thought we are miles away in my heart and soul
    I feel I could reach out and touch the heartwarming friendship from all of my sis and friends here on AP
    Best of luck in the contest
    I love your background
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • gaze
    August 10, 2008

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    I know many people that I consider friends, on and offline, but my sisters are my greatest and closet friends of them all. Just like it feels for you, without them my life wouldn't be whole (even though we live so far away apart).
    Your poem tells exactly how I feel...loved it!


  • fathom me
    August 9, 2008
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    Lovely fun poem! Enjoyed it.. ..full of warmth and fun

  • Maureen silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    Great poem, Dee!

    Love the background, too! I'd rather have friends than anything else I can think of. I like that you like cats, too! They're often misunderstood but you and I know when it comes to pets, they're the cat's meow! Your sense of humor and just plain 'good sense' make you a great person to know. We may not know each other very well but I like what I know. How could anyone not like you???

    Best of Luck in this contest!



    <3 Maureen


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    "friendship is one of God’s greatest gifts"
    and the best gift we can give to each other.

    This piece speaks truly of your pleasant personality.

    M-C


  • sidewinder silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    without friends within this world life would be worth all it trials and tests that we as humans go thru. and yes I'm honored that you are very much a friend!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill

  • angelica silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    Friends are precious

    Dear Dee, A wonderful poem that shows what a caring lady you are and blessed with family and friends.
    It's wonderful the friends we make here on AP and the strong bond we form with special ones.
    Your poem is beaut Dee and good luck with the voting.
    Love Joan


  • jasminerose
    August 7, 2008

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    Oh Dee, this is truly a beautiful poem from your heart!
    So very true that friends are God's gifts to us all!
    So beautiful and heartfelt!!!
    My best to you in the contest
    Linda

    • catz Moderators member
      August 7, 2008
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      Thank you, Linda for the nice comment. I'm so appreciative of the friends I've made on allpoetry, you included

      Dee


  • leo2
    August 7, 2008

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    Aww Dee,
    It is I, my dear friend, who am thankful for letting me be a teeny tiny part of your life. I wish you well in the contest and all your endeavors.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

    • catz Moderators member
      August 7, 2008
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      Thank you, Leo for your sweet comment. You have been a friend and supporter of my feeble attempts at poetry and it's much appreciated


      Dee


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    people are our life...

    and you poem reflects this well in an easy to understand way. It is heartening to see that there are still many people who over-ride the problems politicians and media give us, and come down to the basics. People are our life and our relationships are the highest priority.

    You say it so clearly in your wonderful poem.

    • catz Moderators member
      August 7, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comment. Yes, friendships and relationships are truly important basics in our lives... I treasure the ones with which I'm blessed

      Dee


  • hugh wyles silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    Dear Dee,

    Five years ago I joined AP and you, my dear, were first
    to say hello and tell me that my poems were not the worst.
    You introduced me to some other poets on this site
    and still I read and learn a lot from everything they write.
    You always take the time to help and offer good advice
    and encourage where it's needed, just because you are so nice.

    Now you're a moderator your promotion may not end
    but however high you rise I hope I still may call you FRIEND.

    A great and fitting entry in this contest which I hope gets well placed in the voting.

    With applause, love and hugs, XOXOXO Hugh (R.)




    • catz Moderators member
      August 7, 2008
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      You can call me friend anytime, Hugh. Even through our ups and downs, we both stilll keep hanging in there, don't we. I remember our first communications on allpoetry. I didn't realize just then what a wonderful poet you are but I was soon to see it

      Thank you for the nice comment.


      Dee


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    That is such a nice poem about your friends...I agree with yem...I don't make friends very easily either but when I do they are there for the long haul...Your friends are like that also...I think you are one of the most well liked and appreciated poet on this sight...and for good reason...Good luck in the contest...Love and hugs my best sis...

    • catz Moderators member
      August 7, 2008
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      Wow, Sis... flattery will get you everywhere
      This site is beginning to realize what a good, hard working poet you are as well as being a kind hearted good person. Thanks, Sis for your wonderful comment. You are not just my sister, but you're just about my bestest friend as well.

      love and
      Dee


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    August 6, 2008

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    I don't make friends easy. I'm not a real social person...very reclusive actually, I just kind of like to bounce in, say hello and then get out of everyone's way...sometimes I get in the way, but I'm pretty easy to roll over...no, I don't know what I am talking about either...

    People like you...more important, I like you...and I don't like a lot of people, lol...I hate none but most are just sort of there. Anyway, you are fair minded, unassuming, funny, kind, logical and all that good stuff people like. Now send me a Moxie for being nice.

    But I was being honest.

    • catz Moderators member
      December 4, 2008
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      Ahhh... you're a sweetheart of a guy, thank you for such a nice comment. A case of Moxie on the way... oh, wait, can't get Moxie in Arizona, not that I know of anyway

      You just keep being you, I kinda like you this way, anti social or not


      Dee

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