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the crave

the phone rings;

youre the one i call
when i cant speak.
cant say anything
at all
heavy breathing;
i cant breathe.

i see you
when i close my eyes,
im blind
but i can see the world,
it turns.
i see
the fade.
i need
to feel the burn
in my throat
i got the itch
i need my fix
i got the crave

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Humm..I can see the crave for the connectivity with Unknown..and the efforts are seen in the words...I love it..well done..