in the reflection, i see her face
takin me away to a peaceful place
i run my hands down her body
as i whisper in her ear i'm sorry
my tears echoing a dark resentful past
everything was going too fast
i needed her now but she didn't exist
she was not the girl i kissed.
i looked into her deep empty eyes
she was a girl made only of lies
she was only real deep in my imagination
as the lies grew with further magnification
everything i loved was nothing but a story
i was knocked down from the highest steps of glory
stripped of everything i believed in
now i find it difficult to stip the bleeding.
every new day creates more fresh pain
all that past pain still remains
i'm now starting to doubt my own existance
i can't continue in my persistance
she sinks into the background
where she can't ever be found
i continue on with my life
coz i don't see the point in picking up the knife!!!
Please let me know how this makes u feel when reading it!
Comments
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AMAZING!!!
You are good at writing poetry. the words fall in beautifully and its awsome.
keep it up!
All my love,~Miranda~ -
wow ur poetry is amazing!
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WOW
I loved it...that was amazing babe!
I really liked this part:
she was a girl made only of lies
she was only real deep in my imagination
as the lies grew with further magnification
everything i loved was nothing but a story
i was knocked down from the highest steps of glory
Those were really strong lines!
keep it up!
Alanna
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Very Touching... continue on with my life
coz i don't see the point in picking up the knife!!!... I loved this part it show that you have the will power to not do something that you shouldn't... I really like the word usage too... I just loved it Period
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