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The last time

The last time he saw her
it was just a hand,
flashing in the sun

From a window
of a pickup at a stop sign

He waved back not knowing
who the hand belonged to

Behind the windshield a
girl with a stern
expression watched him
passing by

Until the hard look broke
to a full smile
with her arms embracing
the steering wheel

The last time –
the last time he saw her

she seemed happy

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