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Strings

Divine violins,

strung in splendor,

upon landscape,

to resonate their serenade

unto the soul.

 

Bring heaven's saving sonata

in inspiration's notes.

 

Creating joy's song

within the heart

of spiritual ears.

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Prompt:
Melodies from Heaven

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  • Age of Rain
    August 6, 2008

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    Beautiful in its brevity. Once again you prove you are a master of language and imagery. Brilliant take on the prompt!

  • Topnotchsy
    August 6, 2008

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    Beautiful piece. As one who plays an instrument I often feel that music and melodies come from above. They are a special gift that we've been given to enrich our lives.
    Sorry for the rambling but this poem got me thinking that way, and I find myself typing what I am thinking.
    Thanks for sharing.


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    August 6, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    I like the references to musical instraments and songs. Spiritul and modern, almost like a modern hymn.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • smonte19124 gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Beautifully written. I wish it could be longer because I wanted it to continue. Good luck


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    Excellent take on the prompt. Your word usage was superb.

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