Do you remember,
when you first walked upstairs?
Do you remember,
why you colored your hair?
laugh out loud while you can,
it was time when we didn't care,
a time we used to be bears,
in that living room downstairs .
On the beach we laid,
the lemonade homemade.
I didn't mind that we were lame,
watching t.v. everyday.
I used to hold you
like every night never came.
looking at space stargazed,
praying to see just her face.
So do you remember why i first sang you this song,
because of could would and seesaw loves,
and long since i ever could walk on two shoes,
I finally found someone just like you.
A contest entry
- true love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i think this is a really well written poem by a very talented writer
i hope you will continue to write poems as good as this one
i have also read some of your other poems that you have written and i completely loved them all.
i hope that if i ever have a contest that you among others will enter. -
that beautiful thing called love that is soo simple yet soo complex, excellant poem
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And that was the achievement my friend which is a joy to feel and magic to know... I love it ..well done ...my friend...
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it shows in this poem i wish u best of luck on other poems u make connecting the the last comment by Sakura Avalon
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love is amazing
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