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She’s Somebody’s Child

Somebody
Loved
Her
Once
Upon
A time


She's
Just
Lost
And
Herself
She
Can’t find

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    this is an excellent take on the prompt. a very sad tale that you have told. the emotions that she is feeling literally jumps off the page.

    good luck

    kat


  • KayJay
    August 10, 2008

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    A sad tale and seems to capture her mood of loneliness and despair... Excellent write and a teriffic entry...
    Ken


    • smonte19124 gold member
      August 10, 2008
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      Thank you very much for taking the time to read and for your comments. God Bless/