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A Trick

I feel so comforted

by the warmth

the light

the thing that surrounds me

but I know it's a trick

the darkness pulls me in

I can't escape

it hurts

I never listen

It's always a trick

Author notes

Gummie bears will soon rule the world

G-- http://eclipse.astronomie.info/1999-08-11/Bernd/eclipse-5exposures.jpg [[picture]]

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  • Missa
    August 6, 2008
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    oh sorry nevermind. i see it. its the comment thing. ignore the last comment

  • Missa
    August 6, 2008
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    you need the quote and option in your authors notes or i will have to delete you. you will be added to the finalist when you add those things in