Slowly she wakes,
from 100 years of rest.
Cautiously she exits,
almost somewhat possessed.
Seductively she hunts,
unaware to everyone!
Author notes
Pic found at Deviant Art
http://revmac.deviantart.com/art/WIP-Sensual-Greed-76156892
A contest entry
- 15/20 Semi - Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
450 points, ended August 11, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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her slits of deep
lapis lazuli thread
sewn lids ripped open
by hands and wrists once
trussed across her
dry river bosom
now flowing red
just where you took me...
neat photo
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Very nicely done once again...
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Beautifully done ~ congrats
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A wonderfully seductive and dark penning... a good tale of darkness and a wonderful entry!
Ken
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I really love the take on the prompt that you took here. this is very powerful, dark and WOW.. I really enjoyed reading this.
good luck
kat
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*shakes her head* You know my brother, No matter how many of yours I read, you never cease to amaze me with the wonderful words that spill from your quill!
This is fantastic!!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
Ek is lief vir jou altyd
Nyetta
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I love the action you have set forth for her. Great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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ooooooooooooooooooo love your take on this..... great job........
Seductively she hunts,
unaware to everyone!
hehe... love it... thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest -
Very nicely done!! It's like she's a succubus awakened!! Scary and seductive!!
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Oh! this is really sensual yet dark.. lol. I really love it! though I can't read it
had to highlight it lol.. anyway you did a wonderful job... Best of luck hun..
Angel
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