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Concept of Sight

amazing the life that goes around us everyday


to my left lovers express there miss for each others lips

to the right i catch sight of something amazing

i turn only to see short fashioned hair
ill see her again
ahead fools fooling like they do
the fakers
immature armatures to this high school life
but who am i to judge
another class
i become a waist of space
thinking of everyone and everything but
what is going on right in front of me
she sneaks back into my mind
and stays there until i leave
the halls a peaceful place
with every size style gender and race
i push my way forward
shes cute but too young
hes trying too hard
that’s an ugly shirt
what are you looking at?
then i see her
first the eyes force my thoughts clear
the smile makes my knees lean
shes not dressed to impress and yet looks better than
her, her and her
natural beauty hard to accomplish
and yet i look at a Goddess
the moment passes i speak a greeting
something not worthy of her time
floating my way to along i see others
there not her
she cant look at me and bring me peace
i hear Hi’s i see smiles
i reply of course
but her eyes corrupts my mind
the day is though
my nightmare is over
couples running over each others tongs
as if they wont see each other again
i envy them
home is the way to go
where i can enjoy my day
only to repeat the good the bad
and see the happy and sad
tomorrow
will i see her?

~The Don~

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  • saaraah
    August 6, 2008
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    This is really great, I love it.