"That no good worthless man a mine
out drinkin in them bars alla time ...
shit Macy, he ain't worth a dime!"
"You think that's bad Loretta, well I gotta tell ya
it's a living hell livin with my fella.
Pittbull mean, and he's gotta heavy hand.
"Ya gotta wear ma shoes ta truly understand..."
"Baby ya don't know how long
them words was ringin in my ears!
List'nin to them two old gals given each other the gears.
I remember thinkin I ain't never gonna be like them!
But I was just a kid back then ...
I didn't have a clue...
I never knew ....."
"Well, my heart's been broke.
Been, screwed, blued and tattooed.
My throat's been choked.
Shiny green iivy grew across the wall
as i was passin out ... took it as a sign.
An I keep that vision with me alla the time...
Oh, then this other feller, well
he robbed me blind."
"Other things happened
but I ain't tellin you.
I'm too afraid lover 'bout what you might do.
And if I lost ya sweetcakes, well,
I'd lose my mind too...
never realized love could be so fine."
"Ya make me laugh!
Wanna sing all day
While doin dishes or cookin
or puttin the laundry away..."
"Ya make me feel safe"
"An when my monthlies come,
guts achin and sore,
why you'll run right over
to that 7 Eleven Store.
Bring me back chocolate and Tampax
and say no more 'cept
come 'ere sweet pea
lemme me rub yer back..."
"An it don't hurt none yer a madman in the sack!"
And what a fine daddy!
You even took the time
to earn the hard-won-love from
that moody man-child of mine.
An treat him no diff'rent when the babies came...
lovin him just the same..."
"Aw darlin, when ya take me out,
why I feel like a queen!
Like the prettiest damn woman who's ever been!
An I can tell when I'm with ya yer proud to be seen ...
with me!"
"And ya never cage me in.
Allas know I'll never leave ya, so my spirit breathes free!
I wish them two old biddies was still alive to see...
me and my man and how good love can be!"
Gold trophy winner
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Saucy and HOT...loved this flow. Gr8t job, good luck.
Thanks for entering and good luck. Write on. 
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