Rain, heaven's song.
Little notes waiting to be struck,
Producing a rhapsody.
Soothing sounds,
The pitter-patter of raindrops.
My eyes follow them.
Some make music;
Others crash against pavement.
Author notes
I love the rain. It truly is the most heavenly sound of earth.
A contest entry
- Quickie Word Prompt by Little Eagle.
300 points, ended August 6, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry
I too love the rain and the sound it makes. That and the sound of the Ocean. They are such peaceful and soothing sounds. I also like how this ties into the prompt.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
aha crumbs. i was about to enter this contest, then i read the other poems and realised that you have already written a poem almost exact to mine. darn it
this is truly beautiful. good luck in the contest
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