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Precious Harmony

Casting praise upward,
caught by sunlight's
waiting, eager hands
beauty reflected back
blinding my eyes
precious harmony drifts
through heightened hearing
a rousing crescendo
gives my heart
wings to soar.

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    August 6, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    Lovely imagery. This makes me think of someone singing praises to God or praying to God and then that praise and prayer being reflected back to the person.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • Michael H.
    August 6, 2008
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    I like this.