Embarrassing moments well I know a few
but mainly just one, it made me feel blue,
we went on a day trip the coach it was full
with parents, teachers, kids from the school.
It started so well, we sang having fun
this day was so nice, no clouds only sun,
the driver was happy joined in with a song
but then in an instant, it all went so wrong.
Suddenly silence around me there fell
kids started heaving, caused by a smell,
its power potent, bringing tears to my eyes
songs turned to choking, shouting and sighs.
There in a corner my boy quietly sat
I knew it was him, he was the rat,
a stink bomb he’d broken on the floor
now we’re not welcome on trips anymore.
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a wonderfull poem as always. good job.
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ha! those stink bombs have surely had their days with my boys. I remeber those stinkers! thank you so much for entering this.
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Funny write. I imagine I enjoyed it more reading it now than you might of at the time Best of luck in the contest.
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Tihi, kids will always be kids. Honestly I dont understand them anymore...Can't figure out why I acted like that a few years back
Best of luck in the contest!
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Very Funny
This is so funny! Of course that’s because I wasn't on board. Well written and the rhyming was just right. Loved it. Good luck in the contest
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I think the parent is usually more embarrassed than the child in such memorable moments! The addition of the heaved lunches could not have improved the aromatic state of the coach (and some have windows that only open a crack!) What a nightmare! Very enjoyable retelling, nicely rhymed!
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