Tantalizing seduction,
money tainted as it passes hands,
enticing sexual deprivation,
deviant addictions,
susceptible souls bound, an eternity of pain.
In a list
A contest entry
- 15/20 Semi - Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
450 points, ended August 11, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice... a dark take that captures the depravity of the prompt... Well written with great imagery and power... A terrific entry that's appreciated...
Ken
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WOW, your take on the prompt is outstanding and its unique.. great job on this poem
good luck
kat
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You saw this in an entirely different way, but then, I'm a man. I've read it three times to try to understand and I'm getting there. I just know it's a beautiful piece of prose.
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This is a wonderful take on the prompt
Very unique, a well penned poem for sure.
Best of wishes to you
tony
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Oh wow I love the thoughts you have penned with this poem hun
Paints the image brilliantly
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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ooooh my! excellent choices of words, thanks for sharing, all the best in the contest
Luck.
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