When I first saw you, man, I thought you were the prettiest little thing
ponytails down to your elbows, those little bony, ashy knees
you held my hand and whispered softly, we’d be best friends for the week
but I couldn’t let you go, you were the classmate of my dreams
I would give you all my pudding for a wet kiss on the cheek
but baby girl, you got me twisted, made niggas think I was weak
so I showed you my guns, grew up, made you compete
with those chickenhead bitches, I was just after one thing
didn’t take it from you, cause I didn’t deserve it
prettyface, you’re damn near perfect, made me find somethin of purpose
kill any nigga who hurts you, they don’t deserve your importance
your spirit’s potent and I would lay my life down for it
this is how much I love you, I ain’t no beezy but no contest
when those lil niggas come knockin they better puff up they chest
cause you my girl, my little shawty, your left eyebrow’s pretty stitch
I’ll even give you the last onion ring off my plate, ain’t that a bitch!
Author notes
Hope this is what you lookin for.
t.e.h. this is for you and i posted a dang poem, geez.
A contest entry
- Show Me Your M-E-T-H-O-D, Man by secberm.
1000 points, ended August 23, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great! I liked the onion ring, that is real love right there.
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Well, bro-hiem... Considering you've no other writes for me to compare this to, then I'll assume this is indeed your voice, your style. It's an honor to have your first post as an entry. Thank you! Write on and good luck. One.
Dez
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