Sternness embodied with femininity,
strangled and poured into fashionable clothing.
Ember tendrils held captive unable to flow free
and frolic amidst gentle breezes.
Laughter muted, sadly locked away deep within,
precedented by domestic duties;
keeping idle hands preoccupied.
Luna fireflies feel her disdain,
softly whispering secrets of rose petals
into dainty caverns echoing eardrums
of adventurous tales.
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Excellent
Such a beautiful weaving of words. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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True Beauty
Wow; you took my brain for a sweet adventure here with your words. Imagery was so subtle & beautiful.. really stained my mind with lovely thoughts & feeling.
You know how to take a picture & really blow life into it that didn't exist before.
That's hard to do, but you've mastered it.
I missed these writes, I'm glad I read them, definately will be reading more. You are very talented.
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Provocative!
A beautiful and endearing write. Thank you for your deep interpretation and best of luck in my contest. -
Your poem seems like a flower, first locked , then slowly opened....into wonderfully imagery. Your first stanza tend a little destriptive, but then your tone also changes...like as if you have also break through a wall in your mind...an interesting read for sure! Good luck in the contest
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