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I Won

I am who I am because I stood tall
when everything around me seemed to crumble and fall.
I just took a deep breath and buckled right in
and began playing life's game; determined to win.

Life made the first move and knocked a peice of me out
but I came back with a vengeance; I had no doubt.
Moving forward I took life by the heel.
I hit life so hard that life began to reel.

If I had any fear, I confidently hid it.
I set out to conquer life and guess what? I did it!
See in this game called life you must play by the rule.
Just be strategic because life ain't no fool.

Me? I just looked life straight in the eye.
I mustered up a big old grin. It was no time to cry.
I played life's game hard and emerged triumphantly.
That's why I am who I am. And who I am I won the right to be.

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  • Ephiphany
    August 7, 2008

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    Superb!!!!

    This is outstanding work Blessed Poetess. I'm always excited to read your Art, because you have a story to tell. In Truth you stand tall and will definately go very far. Good luck, all is Well

    Ephiphany


  • HoneyFire
    August 6, 2008
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    YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING POET!
    THIS POEM RITE HERE IS DEEP AND IM SO PROUD OF YOU THAT U MADE IT!