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So sweet ( Sonnet )

Dance to the rhythm that beats in our hearts,
the DJ knows us, he's playing our song.
When I'm not with you, we're never apart,
our two souls entwined, to you I belong.

Sweet flowing melody, dancing with you,
fitting so well, gliding across the floor.
Look in my eyes, you'll know my love is true,
you are the one that I truly adore.

Your voice sending chills up and down my spine,
cant get enough of you, I'm addicted.
You are the best part of God's grand design,
if love was a crime, I'd be convicted.

Dancing slowly, to the rhythm, the beat,
kissing those cherry lips, that taste so sweet.





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Love you Tory, for you baby.

Prompt:

O - “God is a DJ, life is a dance floor, love is the rhythm, you are the music.”

“Gummy bears will soon take over the world”

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  • piccola silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    good job with the prompt though I suspect the prompt is always Tory.) like the prompt you chose. nice job.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    This was beautiful.
    Thanks so much honey.
    Awesome. Best wishes in contest

    Love ya too.

    Tory


  • Missa
    August 6, 2008

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    awww i love this! so cute! my favorite part is:
    "Dancing slowly, to the rhythm, the beat,
    kissing those cherry lips, that taste so sweet."

  • Missa
    August 6, 2008
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    please message me when you are finished. no rush.

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