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Tears falling faster

Like hearts beating faster,
And kisses getting longer,
smiles getting brighter,
And grass turning greener.

Laughs getting louder,
And Hugs getting tighter,
Roses are getting redder,
And Hands are holding tighter.

Tears falling faster,
Razors going deeper.
Arms getting bloody,
Everyones screaming louder.

Cokes getting stronger,
Livers getting weaker,
Hearts getting torn,
As a new baby's almost born.

Minds getting smarter
And Looks are getting stronger.
Petals falling faster,
Floors getting redder.

Everyones crying louder..
everything could have just gone according to plan
life wouldn't be so difficult..
Tears are falling faster.

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  • Lonely Christina
    August 28, 2008
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    wow this is amazing no wonder u got gold! good job
    xoxo- christina


  • IronMaiden1236
    August 20, 2008
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    ERRR.....

    errrr....chaotic...which is the point...;}


  • HiddenByTheDark
    August 6, 2008

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    I think this is an amazing poem... it seems to have an energy about it that keeps you reading. Good luck & keep penning..

    ♥always Kate