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~Dance for Two~

Footsteps suspended in air,
your backs lower arch beckoning my hand,
rhythm vibrating through out our bodies,
guiding each step.

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  • Gypsie Ink
    August 12, 2008

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    Delightful

    A passionate and moving write. How nice to dance, so wonderful. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest.


  • Nevel
    August 6, 2008

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    lovely and vivid done! a strong poem also, great job! Good luck in the contest

  • imahealer
    August 6, 2008

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    You, through your imagery described the tango! My favorite dance! Best wishes sis!
    Love, LInda


  • creationsfromheart
    August 6, 2008
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    very vivid desription in 20 words good luck sunshine