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eyes, lips, and a smile

Eyes of hazel
Brightly shone
In the light
All alone

Lips so tender
Mouth those words
Sweet nothing-
All I heard

Those eyes and lips
That smile too
Make me realize-
I LOVE YOU!

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  • Yorkshire Rose
    August 12, 2008
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    very well composed, pure brillance

  • tears o rain
    August 7, 2008
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    Sweet!!!

    This is a beautiful poem. I love it! I think that your husband to be is a lucky man. Good luck

  • jazzle
    August 6, 2008
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    very very sweet. Keep up the amazing poetry dear!