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Price of a Smile

Behind the dripping darkness
Light plays the game of hide & seek
Heart sitting numb shackled cries to break free
Hope flutters its wings wide reaching for skies
Another day is gone by waiting

Shadows follow diligently trailing behind
Mind bathes in rain of logics
Soul calls our name with open arms
Eyes blinded with night seek for the light

Broken heart once scuba dives into ocean of dimness
Panting for breath of fresh air
Around it swirls hopeful life
Only if we remove the shades from our eyes
We can see the sunlight

With one more knock at the door
Open your heart to the world
Once again you shall find your smile
One more chance you’ll get to be free
Another chance you’ll get to live
Only if you take another chance to love again
This time only not to fall in love but to rise above

…Past may leave scars but only to remind us
We have come far along into the present
…Present shows us what we hold in our hands
The future unknown that life shall unfold
But only if we love to live our today.

…Every day is a gift, precious and priceless
Time comes to steal it away
But leaves behind a bagful of memories
That makes us cry to know the price of a smile

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  • Angelflower
    August 18, 2008

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    This was such a wonderful piece.. I really liked the imagery and how.. uplifting it was.. thank you very much for sharing.. I really loved it..Best of luck..

    Angel
  • dillpickle62
    August 18, 2008
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    Whoa!

    This is beeu-ti-ful! Wow!


    • imperfectperfection silver member
      August 18, 2008
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      Thanks Ned

      Hey there stranger, thanks a lot for stopping by and always reading my poems... I appreciate it a lot. I haven't had much time to stay back on this site... just work is keeping me going, which is great ... anyways, thanks for your support... Say my Hi to Red & Alwin ... take care Minoo

  • sunshinegirl
    August 7, 2008

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    WOW!! You know my dear, With each piece of yours that I read, I see sooooo much growth, and a wonderful writer blossoming! This is incredible!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • imperfectperfection silver member
      August 18, 2008
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      Thanks beautiful

      Thanks Nyetta hun, you are amazing person who knows how to touch someone's heart... thanks babe for always there supporting me and making my day with your comments... work has been crazy busy and has not given me time to do anything else... appreciate your time hun... take care Love Minoo

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 7, 2008
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    i don't have much to say on this but wow, keep it flowing my friend and good luck in the contest


    • imperfectperfection silver member
      August 18, 2008
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      Thanks Aaron

      Thanks hun for your constant support... appreciate your time hun... appreciate your comments always... take care hun Minoo
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