S c r a t c h i n g
Into the surface
Of my being
Hands
W
r
a
p
p
e
d
Around my throat
D
i
g
g
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n
g
Deeper and deeper
To my soul
Both thrusting
All we have
At each other until
E s t a c y
Has been let loose
Author notes
for you...!
A contest entry
- Options!! or Whatever!! by HiddenByTheDark.
450 points, ended August 22, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
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WOW! What a read this one is! Something tells me you wont need luck in this contest, as it is fantastic! You did a great job on it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Ahh yes, I know that kind of grasping and powerful release! Very intense and raw sensuality here.. well done!
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I really really like this poem... the way you have the words look like they are falling down. I like the imagery provided too.. keep penning & good luck
♥always Kate -
wow. very emotionally captivating
'tis wonderful
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hehe thanks......
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Nice job. Very powerful.
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hehe..... thanks ummmm brother lol
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Such and emotionally powerful poem! So much so I'm not sure how to take it. But wow!
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hehe thanks..... for at least commenting.....
its the ummm "mood" im in....
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