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Rhymes

I have been writing poetry for years
My emotions can make you laugh or drive you to tears.
This is all I know is rhymes.
It flows through my veins like wine.
I don’t even know why I am in this contest.
I have nothing to prove,  my poetry says the rest..

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  • Ephiphany
    August 21, 2008

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    Love

    how you ended this piece, well spoken my friend, good luck in the contest I really enjoyed this.

    e


  • Mallig gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    Very nice, your passion for poetry shines through!


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    August 7, 2008

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    Simple yet so powerful. The rhyming and flow are good. I can hear your voice matching this poem.
    Well done.


  • secberm
    August 6, 2008

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    Well done, brother. Pretty aggressive feel. I like. As I have read your works, I know this is indeed your voice and your flow. Thanks for entering. Good luck and write on.

    Dez


  • KayJay
    August 6, 2008

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    Bravo... well said. You're method is in your heart and that's all that's needed... the rest is available on the page... Good job.
    Ken

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