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Colder

Is it possible for me to get any colder?
Do I even want to get any older?
All these things that I've been through.
And I just don't know if I want to.

Slam the door in my face.
Banish me from this place.
Just like everyone else who has gone.
Telling me that I was always wrong.

I feel so empty.
Is it still me there inside my body?
I don't even know,
Why I can't let you go.

After everything I said and swore.
It seems you've got me back once more.
There has to be a reason.
Tell me there's a reason!

Why I can't go.
I need to know,
Will this work out?
I need to know now.

Please tell me what you think

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  • XxEMOxHARDCORExx
    August 9, 2008

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    very good write. :]
    i know how you feell, believe me, i've been there.
    you're an amazing writer though! (: