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Some Wednesday Morning

I chased the dog all morning long
who refused to come inside.
When he finally did, he dove under the bed;
the safest place to hide.

My hair's a mess, I must confess
and my outfit is less-than-cute.
Now I'm at my job looking like a slob
and I forgot my lunch, to boot.

The office is cold and my work's getting old.
It isn't even noon!
I can not deny it, I HATE all this quiet.
I need to get out...and SOON!

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  • Sandi Alford gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    don't ya hate it when that happens, cute pen with very good inline rhyme going on, well done

    Let the ink flow!
    blessings, sandi


  • darlintlc silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    Very amusing poem...good rhyme and it brings a smile to the readers face!

    Thanks for entering
    darlintlc

  • piccola silver member
    August 20, 2008
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    this is cute. Nice rhyme and cute story. thank you for entering and brightening my day ... again.

  • piccola silver member
    August 13, 2008
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    some days just get off to a bad start then it seems everything goes wrong. thank you for entering

  • Topnotchsy
    August 13, 2008

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    Haha great write. Really enjoyed this one. The rhyming and rhythm were a great complement to a funny poem.

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