Your death consumed me,
no thoughts but you.
Time goes by but the pain remains,
utterly unbearable.
Forced breath, I blame you.
Try to smile,
try to laugh,
but tears simply fall.
Gazing upward wondering if you are watching, my guardian angel.
Trying to be with you.
Sharp glass, deep cuts.
Crimson blood seeping downward.
The heavens didn't want me,
now I sit alone.
To be with my love would make me whole.
Soulmates who found eachother,
then torn apart in life.
A moment that changed my world.
Now all is broken,
never to be the same.
Our union is just an action away,
you are just a blade away.
A contest entry
- Give Me Something Sad by LittleDecoy.
900 points, ended August 31, 2008, 85 entries
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Comments
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I love it. "You are just a blade away."
It is so sad and powerful, and it makes it seem like the blade really is nothing. I also love how the person becomes you guardian angel. Great choice of words! Thanks for entering! -
A very good write--a very painful read--you captured the emotions involved.
Sorry for you--loss is the hardest thing we mortals face.
Love
bw
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not saying that you would-- but if so then don't do it please. =( that would be sad
but the poem was really nicely written.
it's really inspiring actually..
thanks so much for entering & good luck
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