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Summer Forest






Wild forest girl
roaming through the flowers
and ferns

Free of curfews
Time slips through her
roughened fingertips

Stumbling downwards in her
speed, she becomes entranced
Fixated in this never-ceasing moment
upon the beauty of
one bumblebee...





Author notes

Visual Stimulation: "Summer" by cyzeal at deviantart.com

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  • Gypsie Ink
    August 9, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    If only it didn't take a tumble to stop and see...A wonderful pause. Thank you for another moment shared. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest.

  • celadia
    August 8, 2008

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    this reminds me of a book about children who grow up without other human contact, raised by wolves, they are always SO connected and enthralled with nature.