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Bithday Boys (acrostic)

Bringing joy to your families
Insisting that you always have your way
Remembering every past birthday
Thoughts and feelings you did share
Driving trucks and digging in the dirt
Always knowing your cousin will be there
Your childhood has time to spare

Baseballs, bats, and basketballs
On the play date at the park
Youthful memories you will always keep
So enjoy your birthdays

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Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!

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  • Accidentally Poetic
    August 6, 2008

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    Great write. I loved the part about the balls at the park. Dallas is obsessed with balls, he has a whole collection. Thanks for posting.


  • Mistress Masquerade
    August 6, 2008

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    This made me think of all my boy cousins and my neighbors, it sounds so much like them when they were younger (and even still are) Good luck Amy, this poem was so cute!


    • peridotPixi
      August 6, 2008
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      my son and his cousins are close in age, like 2 months between them so I know how its been with them growing up too, thanks for the luck, im going to need it for this contest, ~Amy


  • daviscth silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    This is such a sweet birthday acrostic. Both of them really likes to play in the dirt b ut then again, what boy doesn't? LOL Thanks for this wonderful entry.